Read the beginning of the story below and complete the story in 600-800 words.
An Unexpected Guest
Riya was terrified when she heard the news on television that an alien spaceship had landed in her city. As a precaution, her father closed all the doors and windows.
Though everyone was asleep, Riya could not sleep a wink. The thought of aliens in her city kept her mind racing. It was almost midnight when she heard the door bell ring.
By now she was really scared. She ran towards the door but her father instructed her to go back to bed. She pretended to go towards her room, but hid behind the sofa and watched her father open the door.
Her father was cautiously trying to open the door little by little, but once he twisted the doorknob, the door opened all of a sudden with a beam of bright light and a irresistable wind blowing towards him. He was shocked and scared with his eyes and mouth open big.
Behind the light, here comes an elgant lady with long light blue hair sliding down her shoulders, just like a waterfall. Hiding behind the sofa, somewhat Riya felt a sense of kindness and familiarity. As the woman moved closer to them, she recognized that it was her dead mother. Her father was choked to speechless. So did Riya. And unconsciously, Riya stood up from behind the sofa.
The "ceased" mother opened her mouth firstly. " Oh, my sweethearts, I am here to pick you up. Let's go to the space together."
"Are you Jane, my beautiful Jane?" He spoke with uncertainty, and his voice was vibrating.
"Yeah, I am Jane, the one always loves you and cherishes you." Her head spinned to Riya," Riya, come here, give mummie a hug." She said, smiling with tears.
Riya was so surprised that she could understand what was happenning. But it feels like something was attracting her to walk towards Mom. She could not help asking, " Really? But why you come from space?"
She loosed a breath, and said,"I was dead indeed. However, one alien brought me back to life. He was a powerful old man, with huge square head, sharp body and long beard made up of silver. It was a wonderful place, no polution, no fights. I am here to bring you to space, because I know, the situation on the earth is worsening. The terrorist attacks are hapennning everyday. The environment pollution is accelerating. The human beings are dying every minute, from hunger, disease and wars."
"How do you know that?" The father asked bewilderingly.
"We aliens can see what is happening clearly on the earth. Recently, many refugees from Syria are striving to survive in Europe. Whereas, unfortunately, a great number of them are drowning in the ocean. Especially that 3-year-old little boy, lying on the beach solitudely and pathetically. He should have been in the arm of his mother, or in the small and sweet bed to fall asleep peacefully and quietly. In spite of that sad and tough situation, many hard-minded Europeans refuse to open the door to the poor immigrants. Worse stil, how many people died of terrorist attacks? The fire shooting in American campus caused 14 kids dead;
The brutal attack on "Charlie's Magazine" robbed millions of French people's freedom and right on speaking; The unforgettable massacre in Paris, ruined people's pleasure in concert, plaza and stadium. That is human, that is how cruel and brutal they are."
Riya said with her big and beautiful eyes winking, "We cannot leave the earth just because of this. After all, we have been living here for such a long time."
"If that is not enough, then what about the environment pollution? Look at the sky, it is totally blanketed by hte smog. We even could not see the distance beyond 3 miles. That makes me sick. I can hardly breathe in such a bad weather. Even though all the citizens wear masks, the horrible diseases could not be avoided. Nowadays, many people died of AIDS, malaria and various cancers. People's lungs, hearts, and livers are exposed to the pollution terribly. Do you want to end with diseases?"
The father's heart sunk. But after a silence, he claimed," You are right, and what you said is true. Nevertheless, as you are, many people just focus on the dark and devil side of the world. Many beautiful and touching moments are neglected by you. The founder and CEO of Facebook donated 99% of the asset--approximately 45 billion dollars to philanthropy, aimed at facilitating the development of medical treatment on diseases, education in rural areas and Iinternet connection for more information available equally to all the people in every corner of the world. That is not merely for his noe-born daughter, but more importantly, it is for a better generation. Many enterpreneurs are trying to making contributions to the world, like the Ice Bucket Challenge last year, that devoted a lot to help those suffering children. The world is becoming better and better. And we hope you can stay with us, in our imperfect but important planet. It is in this planet that we know each other, fall in love with each other and compose this family. We cannot leave and please do ont go, just to be with us."
The Mom was moved by what he said, and said yes. They decided to live in planet and change the planet to a better and beautiful homeland they wanted. That was what everyone on the earth should and must do.
其次谈语言。与其他记叙文不同，这篇文章很大一部分是对话，而语言最为精彩的部分也在对话。对话中，“死而复生“的母亲讲述地球上发生的种种动荡和灾难，希望丈夫和女儿可以和自己到外星球生活，而女儿和父亲却通过种种例子说明，地球正越变越好，我们都有责任留在地球，努力把他变得更好。在这些对话中我读到了作者自己的风格，看到了她对世界的思考。她借着笔下人物的口，声声呼吁我们应该并肩携手，共创更和谐的世界，更美丽的地球。特别是文章最后一句“ this is what everyone on the earth should and must do”， 让我动容。对话中，我可以读出一家人你一言我一语中对世界的关怀，同时这些对话中作者举出的例子之详细，也可以看出她对时事的了解和关心。