【演讲】2015演讲大赛季军刘鹏飞总决赛视频CUT

2016/03/23 16:04:10
2015“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛总决赛赛题
 
 
      刘鹏飞的Maker Plan是做一个帮助留守儿童/空巢老人的帮扶计划,通过网站集结人力物力,为他们提供帮助。
 
选手视频
 
 
嘉宾点评
 
周容宇
2011“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛一等奖获得者
连续多年任“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛决赛主持人
 
      刘鹏飞同学的演讲给我的最直观的感受就是:他真的很在乎那些“people who are left behind”。
整个演讲过程中,他一直在传递一种“我说的事情很重要,你们一定要好好听”的情绪,这是很成功的一种做法(与其说“做法”,不如说是“态度”)。
      在演讲中,这种“态度”是非常重要的。演讲绝不是写好一篇文字再于人群前将它们念出来,而应该是表达自己内心真正想要传递的信息(起码你要让你的听众这样以为)。
      这篇演讲在内容的安排上也颇有可取之处:在开头用一件件“骇人听闻”的“大新闻”成功吸引听众注意,再到后来论述重心转移到整件事情的“可行性”上,从头到尾给人一种“诶,你说的有道理,按你说的去做好像还真能行”的感觉。这种与观众的沟通就是有效的,所以也说得上是一篇很棒的演讲了。
 
单理扬
2009“CCTV杯”全国英语演讲大赛总冠军
 
      刘鹏飞的Maker Plan是做一个帮助留守儿童/空巢老人的帮扶计划,通过网站集结人力物力,为他们提供帮助。这是一个非常棒的点子!并且的确是从中国的国情出发,具有一定现实意义。
      对于这类选题的演讲,Challenger的提问事实上可以被分为以下几个大类:
      1. 问题的严重性,即Severity。为什么这个社会问题应该获得大家的关注?
      2. 方案目标人群,即target group。你的创客计划是否有特定的目标人群,为什么?
      3. 可行性,即feasibility。你的方案真的可行吗?会否产生更多问题?如何应对?
      4. 方案执行计划,即model。你的方案如何开展,能否给一个案例分析?
      5. 解决问题的能力,即solvency。你的方案能否切实解决该问题?为什么?
      在77号选手的Q&A环节中,Challengers在可行性和方案执行计划上对该选手进行了重点追问,例如:“许多留守儿童和孤寡老人家庭经济情况并不好,不一定能够利用电脑或智能手机等设备来获取帮扶项目的信息,对此你如何确保该项目能够帮助到这些需要帮助的人群?”在这一点上,需要选手就项目的宣传方式和运行方式进行拓展、深入阐述,以向评委说明,线下也有途径能够让这些群体获取该项目的信息,有办法实现资源与目标人群之间的对接。如果能在这一点上进行重点阐述,会更好,当然时间也的确是太有限。
      总之,这位选手的创客计划非常有大爱,整体表现也非常不错!
 
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A Network of Love for Left-behind People
 
      Ladies and gentlemen,
      On March 18th this year, an old lady was found dead in her house while her granddaughter was barely breathing beside her. Someday this June, a young kid whose parents left him for work was drowned in a pond and later died. Same news has again and again appeared on the TV. Statistics indicates that more than 20% of the children are left-behind and nearly half the senior citizens are facing the same problem.
      Based on this situation, I intend to establish a social charity network of love to help those left-behind people. This problem has existed in China for many years. I understand that the government has done what they can to ease it. But due to the lack of financial support and staff members, their efforts are often sparse and scattered. So the very intention of my plan is to fully utilize the power of a network. By establishing a network, I want to have a scientific and systematic organization. By establishing a network, I want the volunteers and the staff members to work together to carry out specific projects for specific groups of people. In this way, we can make our own contribution to the society.
      To do that, first we need to establish a website as a connection throughout the country. Then we will have a headquarters and many branches in different provinces, cities and counties. With all the resources we have, we can provide both care and education for the children such as sending teachers to mountainous areas on summer and winter vacation to give instructions on their study or providing psychological support. We can also collect money to cover their tuition fees and part of their medical fees. To help the old, we can build nursing homes so they won’t feel lonely.
      But beyond that, what we do is based on love. We want to spread positive energy through to the whole nation.
      To sum up, I believe charity work should not only be done by rich people but also by ordinary and young people like you and me. We should not wait to do this job in the future but start it right now. We should not do it single-handedly but do it in a team spirit in my network of love.
      Thank you.
 
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