【演讲】2015演讲大赛季军刘诗宇总决赛视频CUT

2016/03/23 15:49:56
2015“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛总决赛赛题
 
 
      刘诗宇希望做一个有关习惯养成的应用软件,帮助人们有意识地养成好习惯,从而给自己并且给世界带去积极的改变。
 
选手视频
 
 
嘉宾点评
 
周容宇
2011“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛一等奖获得者
连续六年任“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛决赛主持人
 
      Make the makers 是一个很别出心裁另辟蹊径的选题。这种选题的好处便是能吸引到人们的注意力,让人们好奇你到底接下来要说些什么。但这种选题方式也有一定的风险:既然不是很多人会一下子想到的东西,一般离常人理解的“中心思想”也会较远,因此很容易跑题。如果想要不跑题,最重要的事情之一就是以最快的速度切入主题,不要铺垫太多。66号选手做得还是不错的!可以看出他整篇演讲都没有离开中国的需求以及如何达到目的,没有在“噱头”上花费太多口舌。从演讲的表现方式来看,总体非常稳当,但也略显着急。毕竟时间有限,又有太多话想说。
 
单理扬
2009“CCTV杯”全国英语演讲大赛总冠军
 
      今天要带给大家的两个关键词为:enforcement和consequence。
      Enforcement即实施和执行。如上演讲是一个非常典型的persuasive speech on policy, 那么就需要演讲者对该计划如何能被实施并且有长期效果做出一定解释。Challenger提问中最有意思的一部分即,该软件只应用于习惯养成的过程,可是要丢失一个习惯也非常非常容易,那么如何才能确保人们能够长期地具备这个好习惯?这就是一个非常典型的关于enforcement的提问。在这里,选手能够做的就是对Maker Plan的model进行延伸和拓展,增加能够确保人们长期坚持好习惯的因素。
      Consequence即计划带来的各种效果。Challenger的一个提问就是,选手的设计的这个应用具有分享的功能,使用这个应用的人可以把自己养成各种习惯的信息分享给朋友看。那么这是否会侵犯使用者的隐私?如何才能确保这样的信息不被别有用心的人使用?事实上,出于好意的政策有时也会带来一些意想不到的负面影响。例如,人们创造社交网站起初是希望创造更多的交流机会,但个人信息的泄露也造成了一些不好的后果。所以,在展示一项新计划时,多多预测该计划可能会产生的问题,对计划的model进行微调,并且对这些潜在的问题做一些问答准备,一定能对Q&A环节有所帮助。
      另外,市面上也有一些和习惯养成相关的应用。那么该应用和其他应用有哪些不同之处?虽然Challenger没有对此进行提问,但这也是一个非常值得准备的问题!
 
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Future 100: Makers of Ourselves
 
      Ladies and gentlemen, good morning!
      My “ maker plans” is not about makers of any products, but about the makers themselves. We will build an incubator for makers. Let me introduce to you all our APP--Future 100: makers of ourselves. Our goal is to encourage everyone to start their pursuits of self-actualization, to elicit their potentials within specific area, and thus to create world-changing products.
      First of all, what does Future 100 mean? We interpret the two words separately. Why 100? Rome wasn’t built in a day, nor is the making of ourselves. Phillippa Lally, in his research on how long to form a habit, reveals that generally after at least 66 days of practice and repetition people can form a habit that they do it without thinking and find it hard not to. Starting with the 100-day plan, we prompt the participants to consolidate their pursuits, to hone their skills, and to shape themselves by virtue of daily accumulation and perseverance. In addition, 100 stands for consummation. A consummation that praises our former 100-day persistence and propels us to continue the next 100-day thereafter. Why Future? The future will be written not by the faint-hearted, but by the doers. Only by becoming doers who put theories into practice can we step closer to the future and write the future. In 100 days, our strenuous practice and repetition will lead us to the future of ourselves. Future 100 will offer us an opportunity to be the makers of ourselves and then the makers of the world.
      Secondly, what are the distinctive features of Future 100? It can provide us with the very help and encouragement we need in the process of becoming the makers of ourselves. Everyday we complete a task, such as practicing piano for an hour, we post it on the platform with illustrations. We will feel recognized when users click likes on our posts, and gain propellants to continue the making of ourselves. We will be incentivized to persistently hold on to the process, because our continuation length will be ranked in the leaderboard and will be slashed down to ground zero once we suspend. We will find friends sharing similar goals in categorized circles, and by a combined strength we can learn faster, stand higher, and work happier.
      We are not always presented with the best opportunity at the best time. If we do not seize the opportunity to shape us, we will never be in time to shape us. Join Future 100, be the makers of ourselves, and make the world better.
      Thanks!
 
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