【演讲】2015演讲大赛亚军钟雨桐总决赛视频CUT

2016/03/23 16:10:05
2015“外研社杯”全国英语演讲大赛总决赛赛题
 

 

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      钟雨桐同学从三个维度对整篇演讲稿进行切分——从本人的需求角度出发,提出VISEE(Vision Enhances Education)的概念;VISEE的具体运作方式以及它能够提供怎样的功能支持;并持续对VISEE存在的意义进行阐释。整篇文章使用移情方式导入,结尾主题升华。全文立意新颖,构思巧妙,行文自然。

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VISEE

      Ladies and gentlemen,
      These days I have two concerns. One, of course, is the FLTRP Cup that I’m currently taking part in; the other, is my GPA, with all the final exams and deadlines for essays looming larger with each passing day. It’s not because I haven’t studied hard in the past three months. To a large extend, I think my worry has to do with my premature decisions on which courses to choose months ago. Several courses I chose are either not in my favor or turned out to be out of my capability.
      As a freshman in university,I have yet to acquire abilities to be fully tapped. More importantly, I didn’t have much access to the necessary information and the feedback from the former students for each course.
      “Where there are complaints, there are opportunities.” And here comes my idea. My “Maker Plan” is an APP called VISEE, which means “Vision Enhances Education”.
      The VISEE I am devising is a solution based on big data technology, which is clearly clarified by Contestant No.2 and Contestant No.7. On the one hand, we have millions of college students as subscribers to my APP; on the other hand, we offer information of professors and courses at our platform. My rationale is to match students’ preferences with the descriptions of the professors and courses. With the help of my APP, the courses to your liking are only a click away.
      As is known, different students expect different things from different courses and professors. In order to make full use of our APP, students can enter their basic information and most importantly, their expectations of the course, whether it’s the pursuit of high GPA, or the preparation for studying overseas, the acquisition of professional and occupational abilities, or simply, the following of some famous or charismatic professors.
      On the other hand, the information of different courses and professors is the main service of VICEE.VISEE opens the floor to comments, scoring and Q&A from students for the courses they took. Based on their personal experience and conditions, a large number of students can give comments and answers to different potential problems. One can have a comparatively comprehensive prejudgment of the course to see whether the course is suitable or not.
      Over 2500 years ago, Confucius proposed that teachers should teach students in accordance with their aptitude. However, today with the help of my APP VISEE, every student can choose their teachers in accordance with their aptitude. Ladies and gentlemen, vote for VISEE and vote for the future of education.
 
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